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Pretend For Me by ~AuroraExecutionchan:iconAuroraExecutionchan:

Categories Literature > Poetry > Romantic > Other Romance > Song


It's still
The piano starts to play
The sun goes down
At the end of the day
I feel you standing 'neath the flick'ring light
Somehow I know it will be all right

And all I ask
Is that you'll stay
Just hold me once
In your embrace
If you don't know
Then say you do
And pretend to love me as I love you

And now
The music fades away
Silence reigns
There is no more to say
I feel your presence in the starry night
Somehow I know it will be all right

And all I ask
Is that you'll stay
Just hold me once
In your embrace
If you don't know
Then say you do
And pretend to love me as I love you
©2009 ~AuroraExecutionchan
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Author's Comments

An old song I wrote. This one actually has music written for it, and if anyone is interested, I can post up the melody online.

I was singing this to myself yesterday and was reminded of just how subtly depressing it is. ^^; I write too much angst.

EDIT: Sorry, everyone. When I submitted it first, I typed it out by memory, so there were a couple errors. I will post the melody on youtube in a bit.


The melody of me singing is now posted on youtube here: [link] !

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~Fire-Chan9490 Jun 28, 2009, 5:10:36 AM
Ah! Could you post the melody? I'd like to hear it. :)

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NOTE: I didn't make my avatar the pentagram to purposely offend anyone, and I apologize if it DOES offend anyone. I'm sorry if it does, but I'm NOT changing it at anyone's request, but my own. Sorry again.
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~AuroraExecutionchan Jun 28, 2009, 8:25:10 PM
I'll do it Monday afternoon, hopefully, and post it up on youtube then. ^-^ I'll also put a link on here and it should show up in your messages again.

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~Fire-Chan9490 Jun 29, 2009, 4:24:12 AM
Oh goody. Thank you!

--
In my past life, I was immortal.
---
NOTE: I didn't make my avatar the pentagram to purposely offend anyone, and I apologize if it DOES offend anyone. I'm sorry if it does, but I'm NOT changing it at anyone's request, but my own. Sorry again.
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~AuroraExecutionchan Jun 29, 2009, 9:03:43 PM
gahh, sorry. I got home kind of late and ended up watching movies with my roommates, so I didn't get a chance to put it up. I promise it'll get put up sometime this week. ^^;

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The Epic webcomic: [link]

Wanzhong Fansubs, currently subbing the series "Qin's Moon": [link]

Club: ~The-Temple
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~Fire-Chan9490 Jun 30, 2009, 7:19:02 AM
That's fine. :) I do that a lot.

--
In my past life, I was immortal.
---
NOTE: I didn't make my avatar the pentagram to purposely offend anyone, and I apologize if it DOES offend anyone. I'm sorry if it does, but I'm NOT changing it at anyone's request, but my own. Sorry again.
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~AuroraExecutionchan Jun 30, 2009, 2:11:55 PM
there you go~ the link is in the description.

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The Epic webcomic: [link]

Wanzhong Fansubs, currently subbing the series "Qin's Moon": [link]

Club: ~The-Temple
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~Fire-Chan9490 Jun 30, 2009, 2:32:43 PM
Ooh. I'm impressed. XD I can't write tunes to save my life. Did you write the words first, or the melody first?

--
In my past life, I was immortal.
---
NOTE: I didn't make my avatar the pentagram to purposely offend anyone, and I apologize if it DOES offend anyone. I'm sorry if it does, but I'm NOT changing it at anyone's request, but my own. Sorry again.
:iconauroraexecutionchan:
~AuroraExecutionchan Jun 30, 2009, 2:55:25 PM
Thanks~

I think I came up with this one at once. Some of my songs are like that, some I write the lyrics first for. It's very rare for me to just write music that I want to put lyrics to later. If I write plain music, it mostly stays instrumental. ^^;

--
The Epic webcomic: [link]

Wanzhong Fansubs, currently subbing the series "Qin's Moon": [link]

Club: ~The-Temple
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~Fire-Chan9490 Jul 1, 2009, 6:44:30 AM
Ahh. I simply lack the motivation to try, since I feel like anything I try for will turn out to be crap.

--
In my past life, I was immortal.
---
NOTE: I didn't make my avatar the pentagram to purposely offend anyone, and I apologize if it DOES offend anyone. I'm sorry if it does, but I'm NOT changing it at anyone's request, but my own. Sorry again.
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